Men Jeans Moccasins Fashion Police, Need Your Opinion?

Fashion police, need your opinion? - men jeans moccasins

I am 23 years young, try to change my style of dress. Tell me what you want from this type of material:

1-white shirt with long sleeves
http://www.bennettsclothing.com/POLO_boys_blaire_oxford_wht.jpg

2-Blue Jeans

3-Black Loafer
http://s2.thisnext.com/media/230x230_no_border/BRUNO-MAGLI-Men-Black-Leather_53448E42.jpg